Digital-Divide/D0/First-Aid-on-Snake-Bite/English-timed - Revision history

PoojaMoolya at 12:54, 8 March 2017

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Pratik kamble at 06:57, 23 December 2016

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Sandhya.np14 at 11:25, 20 June 2015

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Sandhya.np14 at 02:57, 5 March 2015

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Sandhya.np14 at 02:56, 5 March 2015

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Sandhya.np14 at 02:47, 5 March 2015

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Sandhya.np14 at 02:40, 5 March 2015

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Gaurav at 07:32, 9 July 2014

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Gaurav at 05:37, 9 July 2014

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PoojaMoolya at 11:26, 13 November 2013

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-| * How important is first aid and
+|  How important is first aid and
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-| * How to give the correct first aid in case of a snake bite.
+|  How to give the correct first aid in case of a snake bite.
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-|*  Make the person lie down on a flat surface.
+|  Make the person lie down on a flat surface.
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-|*  Roll a cloth on the affected area.
+|  Roll a cloth on the affected area.
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-|* Do not cut the skin or the flesh around the bite.
+| Do not cut the skin or the flesh around the bite.
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-|*  Do not put ice on or around the bite.
+|  Do not put ice on or around the bite.
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-|* Do not shock the person with electricity.
+| Do not shock the person with electricity.
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-|* Do not try to suck the blood or the venom out of the bite and
+| Do not try to suck the blood or the venom out of the bite and
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-|* Do not tie the cloth too tight. This could lead to gangrene.
+| Do not tie the cloth too tight. This could lead to gangrene.
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-|  "Spoken Tutorial" project is a part of the "Talk to a Teacher" project.
+|  '''Spoken Tutorial''' project is a part of the '''Talk to a Teacher''' project.
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-|  Welcome to the spoken tutorial on '''First Aid on Snake Bites.'''
+|  Welcome to the '''spoken tutorial''' on '''First Aid on Snake Bites.'''
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-|  So the boy got the medical aid in time.
+|  So, the boy got the medical aid in time.
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-|   The correct way to give first aid in case of a snake bite is -
+|   The correct way to give first aid in case of a snake bite is:
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-|  Make the person lie down on a flat surface.
+|*  Make the person lie down on a flat surface.
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-|  Roll a cloth on the affected area.
+|*  Roll a cloth on the affected area.
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-|  First lay the victim down
+|* First, lay the victim down.
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-|  When you roll the cloth apply some pressure
+|* When you roll the cloth apply some pressure.
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-| Do not cut the skin or the flesh around the bite.
+|* Do not cut the skin or the flesh around the bite.
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-|  Do not put ice on or around the bite
+|*  Do not put ice on or around the bite.
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 |  02:52
-| Do not shock the person with electricity.
+|* Do not shock the person with electricity.
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 |  02:56
-| Do not try to suck the blood or the venom out of the bite and
+|* Do not try to suck the blood or the venom out of the bite and
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-| Do not tie the cloth too tight. This could lead to gangrene.
+|* Do not tie the cloth too tight. This could lead to gangrene.
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-| This video is part of the bridge the digital divide initiative of the spoken tutorial project.
+| This video is part of the '''Bridge the Digital Divide''', initiative of the '''spoken tutorial''' project.
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-| It summaries the Spoken Tutorial project.
+| It summarizes the Spoken Tutorial project.
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-| If you do not have a good bandwidth you can download and watch it.
+| If you do not have a good bandwidth, you can download and watch it.
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-|  The Spoken Tutorial project team conducts workshops using spoken tutorials.
+|  The Spoken Tutorial project team: Conducts workshops using spoken tutorials.
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-|  Spoken Tutorial Project is a part of the Talk to a Teacher project.
+|  "Spoken Tutorial" project is a part of the "Talk to a Teacher" project.
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-| Watch this boy, who is chasing the ball.
+| Watch this boy who is chasing the ball.
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-| In no time, it crawls out of its hide out.
+| In no time, it crawls out of its hideout.
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-|   The scared boy tries to shoo away the snake by throwing a stone.
+| The scared boy tries to shoo away the snake by throwing a stone.
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 | Watch this boy, who is chasing the ball.
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 |  He spots a snake.
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 |  The snake does not crawl away.
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 |   The boy screams for help.
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 |   There is a commotion.
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-|  Welcome to spoken tutorial on '''First Aid on Snake Bites.'''
+|  Welcome to the spoken tutorial on '''First Aid on Snake Bites.'''
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-| In this tutorial we will see
+| In this tutorial, we will see:
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-| * How important is first aid. And
+| * How important is first aid and
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 | * How to give the correct first aid in case of a snake bite.
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 | Before moving on to the first aid instructions,
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 | They made the boy lie down.
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 | And then they sought the help of elders to shift him to the hospital.
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 |  Yes! In a way it is correct.
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 |  In this case, the hospital was not far away.
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 |  Roll a cloth on the affected area.
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-|  In this way, first aid given in time prevent many damages.
+|  In this way, first aid given in time prevents many damages.
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-|  Do’s in case of a snake bite.
+|  Do’s in case of a snake bite:
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 |  When you roll the cloth apply some pressure
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-|   And the Don’ts in case of a snake bite
+|  And the Don’ts in case of a snake bite:
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-| Do Not Cut the skin or the flesh around the bite.
+| Do not cut the skin or the flesh around the bite.
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 |  02:49
-|  Do Not Put ice on or around the bite
+|  Do not put ice on or around the bite
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 |  02:52
-| Do Not Shock the person with electricity
+| Do not shock the person with electricity.
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 |  02:56
-| Do Not Try to suck the blood or the venom out of the bite and
+| Do not try to suck the blood or the venom out of the bite and
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 |  03:01
-| Do Not Tie the cloth too tight. This could lead to gangrene.
+| Do not tie the cloth too tight. This could lead to gangrene.
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-| This video is part of the bridge the digital divide initiative of the spoken tutorial project
+| This video is part of the bridge the digital divide initiative of the spoken tutorial project.
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-| To know more about the spoken tutorial project
+| To know more about the spoken tutorial project:
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-| Watch the video available at http://spoken-tutorial.org/What_is_a_Spoken_Tutorial
+| Watch the video available at http://spoken-tutorial.org/What_is_a_Spoken_Tutorial.
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 |  03:21
-| It summaries the Spoken Tutorial project
+| It summaries the Spoken Tutorial project.
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 |  03:25
-| If you do not have a good bandwidth you can download and watch it
+| If you do not have a good bandwidth you can download and watch it.
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-|  Spoken Tutorial Project is a part of the Talk to a Teacher project
+|  Spoken Tutorial Project is a part of the Talk to a Teacher project.
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-| It is Supported by the National Mission on Education through  ICT, MHRD, Government of India
+| It is Supported by the National Mission on Education through  ICT, MHRD, Government of India.
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-|  This is Prathamesh Salunke, thanks for joining Jai Hind.
+|  This is Prathamesh Salunke, thanks for joining. Jai Hind.
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-|  His friends runs to his side to help.
+|  His friends run to his side to help.
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 | Before moving on to the first aid instructions,
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 | They made the boy lie down.
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-| 01:51
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 |  Make the person lie down on a flat surface.
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-| 01:55
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 |  Roll a cloth on the affected area.
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-| 01:59
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 |  The primary purpose of this first aid is to stop the poison from circulating throughout the body.
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-| 02:07
+|  02:07
-| And how should we roll the cloth around the wound?
+|  And how should we roll the cloth around the wound?
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-|02:10
+|  02:10
-| Start rolling from the upper portion of the leg and move downwards.
+|  Start rolling from the upper portion of the leg and move downwards.
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-| Shift the person quickly to the nearest hospital for further treatment.
+|  Shift the person quickly to the nearest hospital for further treatment.
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-| Remember, wrong first aid can make one’s condition worse.
+|  Remember, wrong first aid can make one’s condition worse.
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-| 02:32
+|  02:32
 |  Do’s in case of a snake bite.
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-| First lay the victim down
+|  First lay the victim down
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